Today was Jem and I's first day at school. I was so happy that Jem showed me where my class was. I was offended when Jem told me I couldn't talk to him until after school. I understood I was to leave him alone which made me sad.
When I entered the class I was pleased to meet my teacher Miss Caroline. I would be surprised to hear if she liked me though. She started to become very mean and cruel. She hit me with a ruler made me stand in the corner. She was having fun picking on me. Miss Caroline even accused me of lying about knowing how to read. She should get more information. She even told me to tell Atticus to stop showing me how to write. I could not wait to tell Atticus and Jem. Hopefully tomorrow will go better than today. I can't believe that she treats people this way!
I liked how you know Scout very well and talked kinda like her. I still feel like you are talking like Scout at some points and like yourself at others. Can you try and talk like her more? But I feel you did a great Journal entry.
ReplyDeleteI like the blog post and the picture acts as a cherry on an ice cream. But the picture also creates an illusion that the post is long. Its a little short. Also the post is a little off of the story, so I think that you should better understand the book before writing the post.
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